Outlines and planning for Untitled

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Outlines and planning for Untitled Mar 4, 2013 16:06:42 GMT -5

Post by Rebecca Freeman on Mar 4, 2013 16:06:42 GMT -5

(OOC:This is an outline for a fictional character of a fictional character for an in-universe book)

Name:Lenore Pascal
Race: Bluebird Hybrid
Prominent features: Black hair with blue feathers,blue feathers found throughout her body,blue-grey eyes,feathers all over her back,cream colored skin,rarely smiles,red lips
Personality:Sad,introverted,quiet,a bit broken but still strong,large amounts of suppressed anger,a bit cold yet very caring,protective of children
Main Goal:Get her daughter back and be free
Relationships:Nicolette (Daughter) Harris DuPont (Owner/Exploiter)
Job:Slave of Harris DuPont

Time table:
Age 14:Pimped out by DuPont for the first time
Age 19: Has Nicolette
Age 23: Nicolette sold,war starts in Bordeaux
Age 25:Story starts
Age 26:Bombing of Cyr

Tendencies: Will throw things when alone in her room,hates being touched without permission because of her "assignment" as a slave,is initially cold and bitter about sex

Nicolette's father had told Lenore he loved her and promised to buy her freedom but left after their last one night stand

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Outlines and planning for Untitled Mar 7, 2013 15:28:45 GMT -5

Post by Rebecca Freeman on Mar 7, 2013 15:28:45 GMT -5

(This book is being planned out by Rebecca)

Name:~~John~~ ~~Theodore~~ Philippe Godfrey
Race:Human/Metal Man hiding his traits -The latter is not revealed until later on
Relationships: Lenore:Crush DuPont:Employer
Job:Servant to DuPont
Prominent features: Light brown hair,always has his eyes covered usually by a bandana,often wears fingerless leather gloves,metal and wires in his left leg are visible after being near an exploding grenade
Personality:Blithe,observant,easily distracted,hardworking,open-minded,can be over-animated to the point people consider him slow
Fears:Having his nature as a Metal Man exposed,heights
After the bombing of Cyr:Being found and killed by the enemy
Aliment:Blind but can see sound waves through his metal eyes despite his bandana
Skill(s):Playing piano,good marksman

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Outlines and planning for Untitled Mar 11, 2013 14:21:09 GMT -5

Post by Rebecca Freeman on Mar 11, 2013 14:21:09 GMT -5

Races and species:Metal Men,Hybrids,Humans,Native French,Colonists,Native People(The Rouille)

Setting:Fictional French/Cajun colony of Bordeaux in the city of Cyr
-The DuPont Mansion
*Large,Extravagant,and colored like faded ivory
---The Rouge Shed
Red walls,lots of flowers,low lighting

-The streets and docks of Cyr
*Busy,crowded,filled with venders and solicitors,large varieties of sailing and fishing vessels such as finely crafted wooden canoes,cultural Rouille dancers and passersby,a huge economic gap can be seen

*After/During the bombings:Initially panicked and then quiet,burnt ruins

-The Sh'a Forest:A place sacred to the Rouille where birds can not be hunted and an official permanent sanctuary

-Sewers: Wide,smells bad,moist,filthy water

Themes:The juxtaposition of good and evil in the nature of sentient kind.
What people are when not bound by society
Dignity

Rouille is French for rust,they are called that because the colonists view them as primitive and look down on them.

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